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A step in the dark, as many believe.
Not able to understand what it is I perceive.
Drawn to the hope
that makes spirits soar,
another step forward, my hand on that door.

It's frightening,
enlightening,
and heightening my senses.
There are no more walls,
no more hidden fences.

So much to learn
not sure where to start.
No concrete structures,
just follow your heart

They tell me it's dark,
but outside the moon's bright.
So I'll step out of the dark,
and into the light.
a group I'm in is having a poetry reading, we could search for a piece, but they also suggested writing your own poetry. I'm only beginning my path so this is what I wrote.

(C) Beollain
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RainyBear7 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2008
This is really good.. I understand just how you feel. You make it rhyme without it sounding cheesey too! If that makes sense - that's a skill.
Good luck with everything! :)
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Idzie Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2008   Writer
That is absolutely beautiful. I guess I've had pagan beliefs for a while, but I've only recently gone public about it, and I too feel as if I'm just starting out. Anyway, this poem really speaks to me, great work. :)
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Beollain Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2008
:) thank you!
I'm glad that you connected with it :) Thanks so much, have fun with your new adventure
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Idzie Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2008   Writer
Thank you :)

And I'm most definitely enjoying my new adventure :) I hope you are too!
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themadhatter82 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2008  Professional Writer
beautiful! :aww:
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Beollain Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2008
:) thank you :blush:
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SpiritHolly Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2007  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I think it expresses beginnings wonderfully. :3 Specially the part about it 'being dark' but 'the moon is bright'. Good use of inerpriting perspectives there.
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Beollain Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2007
thanks so much! and thanks for the fave as well :D
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bubblegum17 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2007
this is awesome, it has a great rhythm to it... nicely done. congratulations on your new path! welcome! :clap:
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Beollain Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2007
Thanks so much :)
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